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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4

When and where?

Instructions: Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

Jéssica Lacrima...'s submission: Average Rating:
The boy is coming to home at six o´clock.
Susana is going to sleep at a quarter to ten.
The girl is going to work at nine o´clock.
I´m coming back home tonight.
You are coming by car.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • monogamy
    Mochapoints: 1118  |  Teacher Score: 276 (0%)

    The boy will come to home at six o´clock. Susana will go to sleep at a quarter to ten. The girl will go to work at nine o´clock. Iwill come back home tonight. You will come by car.

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  • zlisik
    Mochapoints: 621  |  Teacher Score: 72 (0%)

    Very good.

    However your last sentence "You are coming by car." did not include a time though it is a fine sentence anyways.

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  • mulie
    Mochapoints: 30340  |  Teacher Score: 7652 (97%)

    The boy is coming to home at six o´clock. Susana is going to sleep at a quarter to ten. The girl is going to work at nine o´clock. I´m coming back home tonight. You are coming by car.

    For "home", never use "to".

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  • slimed
    Mochapoints: 5746  |  Teacher Score: 2531 (100%)

    very good. and I agree with mulie.

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  • Phelipe
    Mochapoints: 9441  |  Teacher Score: 815 (100%)

    Muito bom.

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  • Jose~
    Mochapoints: 5456  |  Teacher Score: 4061 (99%)

    Coming home, without TO.

     

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  • esteban
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    The boy is coming to home at six o´clock.

    Very nice!! Good work!!

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  • Fredrick
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    Excellent, Jéssica. Just 1 correction...

    The boy is coming home at six o´clock.

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