Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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I have more than twenty cats in my house. They were all owner less cats from my neighbouring railway station or streets. I have sheltered them. So my house is filled with cats both upstairs and downstairs. They need my warm glance and gentle hands to stroke their backs.
I am busy running up and down for feeding, cleaning, combing and hugging every day. When you call me, you can hear their voices like symphoney.
I am busy running up and down for feeding, cleaning, combing and hugging every day. When you call me, you can hear their voices like symphoney.
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MariapiaMochapoints: 845 | Teacher Score: 472 (0%)At first I sent my paper titled 'At home.' However I found it had been changed into 'Describing the weather.' I don't know why. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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