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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

Wojciech's submission: Average Rating:
The girl has 5 flowers. The man has one bike.They have one dog.I have 5 notebook.
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  • Chorddog
    Mochapoints: 19117  |  Teacher Score: 16834 (99%)

    Very good.

    It is a good idea when writing to be consistent in form when numbering (either 1 or 'one' for everything).

     

    The girl has five flowers.  The man has one bike.  They have one dog.  I have five notebooks .

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Angelica
    Mochapoints: 4148  |  Teacher Score: 3370 (99%)

    Very good. But that is a exercise. You could to write more to learn more.

    Try typing the numbers in words.

    Submitted over a year ago

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