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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

Natalie Segura's submission: Average Rating:
They're men. The flower is pink. These aren't blue cars. I'm a girl. You're a boy. This is a pen. These are trees. These aren't orange flowers.
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  • Célio jr
    Mochapoints: 1476  |  Teacher Score: 474 (100%)

    very well, Natalie !
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  • gerguy
    Mochapoints: 766  |  Teacher Score: 338 (0%)

    Excess use punctuation, punctuation are used to give different meaning to same word . Here are some example to show it .

    1) "woman, without her man, is nothing"

    and

    2) "woman: without her, man is nothing"

    You can see in both the words are same but both the sentence have totally different meaning

     

     
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  • some
    Mochapoints: 471  |  Teacher Score: 190 (0%)

    well done!
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