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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

SANDRITA's submission: Average Rating:
the last time of shooping was saturday, i bougth a pair of shoes, because the weather is so cold here in my country...
the shoes are excellent and confortable too, the colour black.
the coast was s/.150.00 in my coin.
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  • laraopz
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    shooping- shopping confortable- comfortable the coast - the price and i'm not sure about the phrase in my coin...
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  • Camila Akemy
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  • Camila Akemy
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    The last time I went go to the shopping,was been saturday.I bought a pair of shoes,because it is very cold here in my country. The shoes are excellent and very comfortable,and its color is black.The price it was 150R$.
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  • alaa
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    last time shopping comfertable the coulor is black the price
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  • laraopz
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    sorry camila but you're not right. went go - went was been - was you can never use two forms of the same verb
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  • mshock
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    muy bien, pero algunas errores. "The last time that I went shopping was saturday" es correcto. "bougth" es bought. "confortable" es comfortable. "coast" es cost. "The cost was s/.150.00 in my currency" es correcto. Buen trabajo Sandra. -Mateo
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    Mochapoints: 1590  |  Teacher Score: 746 (0%)
    muy bien, pero algunas errores. "The last time that I went shopping was saturday" es correcto. "bougth" es bought. "confortable" es comfortable. "coast" es cost. "The cost was s/.150.00 in my currency" es correcto. Buen trabajo Sandra. -Mateo
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  • rats_star
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    Check my version, Sandrita! "The last time I went shopping was on Saturday. I bought a pair of black shoes. My newly-bought shoes were excellent and comfortable. It cost $150." (The clause "because the weather is so cold here in my country" does not make sense. You do not buy shoes just because it is cold in one's country.)
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