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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

李木子's submission: Average Rating:
im a college student.so Im always busy from Monday to Friday,only have free time on weekend.
I usually brush my teeth before 7.00am and after9.00pm.
I usually finish school after4.00pm.so it's not very late.
I usually go to bed at11.00pm,but on weekend i will go to bed after midnight.
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  • Saran
    Mochapoints: 2562  |  Teacher Score: 572 (0%)

    I am a college......

    So, I am always busy....

    I only have free time......

    So, it's not very late.

    but on weekend, I go will  to bed after midnight...

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  • quicksilver
    Mochapoints: 50637  |  Teacher Score: 36710 (100%)

    Always use a capital 'I' when you refer to yourself in writing:

    I am a colllege  student. I'm always busy from Monday to Friday, so I  only have free time at the weekend.

    ....and after 9.00pm. (Leave a space before '9'.)

    ......after 4.00pm, so it is not very late.

    ...bed at 11.00pm, but at the weekend I will go  to bed after midnight.

    Have a look at the corrections I have made.

    Don't forget about a capital 'I' for yourself when referring to yourself in writing.

    Also, you leave a space before you write a time.

    Well done!

    Submitted over a year ago
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