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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

李木子's submission: Average Rating:
im a college student.so Im always busy from Monday to Friday,only have free time on weekend.
I usually brush my teeth before 7.00am and after9.00pm.
I usually finish school after4.00pm.so it's not very late.
I usually go to bed at11.00pm,but on weekend i will go to bed after midnight.
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  • зубаткo = Katze...
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    I'm a college student, so I'm always busy from Monday to Friday; I only have free time on weekend. I usually brush my teeth before 7:00 am and after 9:00 pm. I usually finish school after4:00pm so that it's not very late. I usually go to bed at 11:00 pm, but on the weekend I will go to bed after midnight.
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  • Archifu
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    Great! But u'd better put a space after the comma. you use too much "usually", I think you can consider the words such as "regularly", "often", etc.

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  • IBRAHIM
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    Good work
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