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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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I want a new PC, but I need to work more for that.
Do you want to go to hospital? Do you need me to get there?
A boy wants to go to a park, but his mother needs to get ready for lunch at first.
He wants to talk with her, but she does not want .
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Peter25
    Mochapoints: 8746  |  Teacher Score: 971 (100%)

    Pretty good!

    I want a new PC, but I need to work more for that. Do you want to go to the hospital? Do you need me to get there? A boy wants to go to a park, but his mother needs to get ready for lunch at first. He wants to talk with her, but she does not want to.

     

    This depends on what exactly you mean:

    Do you need me to get there?

    Do you need me to take you there?

     

    This sounds better with "the".

    A boy wants to go to a park

    A boy wants to go to the park

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Anıl
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  • lerner
    Mochapoints: 1691  |  Teacher Score: 1456 (100%)

    Do you need me to get there?

    'Do you want/need me to take you there?'

    makes more sense.

    subarashii!

    Submitted over a year ago

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