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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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Istiklal street is one of the busiest streets in istanbul. There are several buildings, cafes, bookstores, shops, restaurants and stuff like that. you can find whatever you could in this street. There is a church is around the corner from the cafe. The cafe is on the opposite corner from the bookstore. The bookstore is cross the street from the hotel. The hotel is next to the restaurant. The inn is around the corner from the shop, and next to the mosque.
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  • cielbleu
    Mochapoints: 48171  |  Teacher Score: 28479 (100%)

    Excellent spelling!

     

    Istiklal street is one of the busiest streets in Istanbul. There are several buildings, cafes, bookstores, shops, restaurants and stuff like that. You can find whatever you could in want on this street. There is a church is around the corner from the cafe. The cafe is on the opposite corner from the bookstore. The bookstore is across the street from the hotel. The hotel is next to the restaurant. The inn is around the corner from the shop, and next to the mosque.

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  • ashtricky007
    Mochapoints: 1053  |  Teacher Score: 36 (0%)

    Want instead of could. There is a church that is around the corner from the cafe. The bookstore is across the street from the hotel. No comma needed in front of and.

    Your doing very well, keep it up!

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  • tracy
    Mochapoints: 3548  |  Teacher Score: 1428 (100%)

    you can find whatever you want on this street.

    There is a church is around the corner from the cafe

    The bookstore is across the street from the hotel.

    keep trying! well done!

    Submitted over a year ago

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