Describe your street
Instructions:
Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2
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If I see outside through the window of the first flour we can see just the yard. If I try on second and third, I can see the alley. If I walk on the alley at soon I can see the street. On the street there are some peoples and cars. Oh look at this one! It's going fast across the street! I follow it to take it with my hand! I run like a horse. _ Pitiko Pitiko~~ hehehe
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Hello Mehdi,
If I look outside the window of the first floor, I can see just the yard.
If I try on the the second and third floors, I can see the alley.
If I walk down the alley, soon I can see the street.
On the street there are some people and cars.
Oh, look at that one!
It's going fast across the street. I'll follow it (what is it, a person or a car) and stop (?) it with my hand. I run like a horse.
Ed
Hi Mehdi , Ed has corrected your exercise.There are a few errors and perhaps with a little more study you will eradicate them. Well Done !!!
If I look outside through the window of the first floor, I we can see just the yard. If I try looking through the window on the second and third floors, I can see the alley. If I walk down the alley, at soon I can soon see the street. On the street, there are some peoples and cars. Oh, look at this car! It's going fast across the street! I will follow it and touch it with my hand! I run like a horse.
You have already had good corrections. Is your "pitiko pitiko" the representation of the sound of horses' hooves? That sound is more often rendered as "clippity cloppity" in English, or if the horses are running, as a clattering.