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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

Ezilva de Arauj...'s submission: Average Rating:
The last time When I went the shopping I was very happy in these moment. Your imagine was one morning of saturday. The day was wonderful. But I went with my friends on the train and when we stopping there we were eat one lunch because we were with very hungry and we neither shopping. But was very funny.
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  • ZOMGMiki
    Mochapoints: 2066  |  Teacher Score: 1317 (100%)

    The last time I went shopping I was very happy. Imagine one morning on a Saturday. The day was wonderful. I went with my friends on the train and when we stopped there we ate lunch because we were very hungry and we were not shopping. But it was very funny.

    Good ideas!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • ZOMGMiki
    Mochapoints: 2066  |  Teacher Score: 1317 (100%)

    The last time I went shopping I was very happy. Imagine one morning on a Saturday. The day was wonderful. I went with my friends on the train and when we stopped there we ate lunch because we were very hungry and we were not shopping. But it was very funny.

    Good ideas!

    Submitted over a year ago

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