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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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She is removing the man's teeth.
She removed the man's teeth this morning.
A woman is cleaning the room.
A woman cleaned the room an hour ago.
He is waiting in line now.
He waited in line 2 hours ago.
I am packing my suitcase.
I am packed my suitcase last night.
You are working on the car.
You worked on the car yesterday.
A man is cheking the oil.
A man ckeked the oil 15 minutes ago.
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  • Brian de Tu-Ing...
    Mochapoints: 72608  |  Teacher Score: 65781 (100%)

    Excellent! You just made a couple small mistakes. La correcta seria "I packed my suitcase ..." y "A man checked .."

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  • sonu
    Mochapoints: 3124  |  Teacher Score: 1261 (0%)

    Brian is right

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  • melinap
    Mochapoints: 1779  |  Teacher Score: 359

    good joob!!! ten en cuenta los errores de " I packed..." y ".. checked..." :)

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