Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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Yesterday it is rained a lot but today it is sunny.
Everybody is wearing a sunglasses on the beach.
I'm looking for my hat because I like it
It's snowing now and somebody is playing on the snow
I'm cold because I have no coat
Everybody is wearing a sunglasses on the beach.
I'm looking for my hat because I like it
It's snowing now and somebody is playing on the snow
I'm cold because I have no coat
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Yesterday it rained a lot, but today is sunny.Everybody is wearing a sunglasses on the beach. I'm looking for my hat because I like to wear it. It's snowing now and somebody is playing in the snow. I'm cold because I am not wearing a coat.
Yesterday it is rained a lot, but today it is sunny. Everybody is wearing a sunglasses on the beach. I'm looking for my hat because I like to wear it. It's snowing now and somebody is playing in the snow. I'm cold because I have no coat.
Yesterday it rained a lot but today it is sunny.Everybody is wearing sunglasses on the beach.I'm looking for my hat because I like it.It's snowing now and somebody is playing on the snowI'm cold because I have no coat
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Yesterday it rained a lot but today it is sunny.Everybody is wearing sunglasses on the beach.I'm looking for my hat because I like to wear it.It's snowing now and somebody is playing in the snowI'm cold because I have no coat or I am feeling cold as I am not wearning a coat.
Good work.
Javier
This looks very good!
Yesterday it is rained a lot, but today it is sunny. Everybody is wearing a sunglasses on the beach. I'm looking for my hat because I like it. It's snowing now and somebody is playing on the snow. I'm cold because I have no coat.