Giving and Receiving
Instructions:
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2
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Last year, on X- Mas, I got many gifts from my family. My brother gave me a DVC from Beyoncé, my mother gave me a black purse and a make up and my boyfriend gave me a beautiful blue dress and a pair of shoes. In return I gave to my brother a pair of tenis, because he likes to take a walk every day in the morning; to my mother I gave her perfume my boyfriend got a new suitcase because he usually to travel.
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Last year, on X- Mas, I got many gifts from my family. My brother gave me a DVC from Beyoncé, my mother gave me a black purse and a make up kit and my boyfriend gave me a beautiful blue dress and a pair of shoes. In return I gave to my brother a pair of tennis sports dress, because he likes to take a walk every day in the morning; to my mother I gave a perfume bottle and to my boyfriend a new suitcase because he travels usually.
gud attempt dear but need more improvement.....