Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 103, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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YES IT IS ME:
I am a aged man with and average height and build. I have short grey hair which I occasionally used to color with Hina, but now I have not colored my hair since a long time. I just want to enjoy natural and real of me. I usually have a center parting of my hair, and seldom comb them back. I have French Cut beard and mustache. I have dark brown eyes and eyebrows neither bushy nor thin. I am a realist as well as an idealist. I am habitually reserved and quiet. I am very cautious and disciplined. I am an optimist. In general, I am mild and soft-spoken, but in anger I burst out loud. I prefer to listen than to talk. People find me uneasy going. I am very faithful to my commitments. I am always ready to help the needy ones but within my capacity not in heroic way. Apparently I am extremely unsociable, always try to avoid parties, even family wedding ceremonial parties, but inside there is love and care. I am a hard core for friends, and for them it is not easy to read my emotions.
I am a aged man with and average height and build. I have short grey hair which I occasionally used to color with Hina, but now I have not colored my hair since a long time. I just want to enjoy natural and real of me. I usually have a center parting of my hair, and seldom comb them back. I have French Cut beard and mustache. I have dark brown eyes and eyebrows neither bushy nor thin. I am a realist as well as an idealist. I am habitually reserved and quiet. I am very cautious and disciplined. I am an optimist. In general, I am mild and soft-spoken, but in anger I burst out loud. I prefer to listen than to talk. People find me uneasy going. I am very faithful to my commitments. I am always ready to help the needy ones but within my capacity not in heroic way. Apparently I am extremely unsociable, always try to avoid parties, even family wedding ceremonial parties, but inside there is love and care. I am a hard core for friends, and for them it is not easy to read my emotions.
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YES IT IS ME:
I am an aged man with an average height and build. I have short grey hair which I occasionally used to color with Hina, but now I have not colored my hair since a long time. I just want to enjoy natural and real look of me. I usually have a center parting of my hair, and seldom comb them back. I have French Cut beard and mustache. I have dark brown eyes and eyebrows neither bushy nor thin. I am a realist as well as an idealist. I am habitually reserved and quiet. I am very cautious and disciplined. I am an optimist. In general, I am mild and soft-spoken, but in anger I burst out loud. I prefer to listen than to talk. People find me uneasy going. I am very faithful to my commitments. I am always ready to help the needy ones but within my capacity not in heroic way. Apparently I am extremely unsociable, always try to avoid parties, even family wedding ceremonial parties, but inside there is love and care. I am a hard core for friends, and for them it is not easy to read my emotions.
YES IT IS ME:
I am a aged an older man with and of average height and build. I have short grey hair which I occasionally used to color dye with Hina, but now I have not colored my hair since for a long time; I just want to enjoy the natural and real of me. I usually have a center parting of my hair in the center, and seldom comb them it back. I have French Cut My beard and mustache are in a French Cut style; my eyebrows I have dark brown, eyes and eyebrows neither bushy nor thin and dark brown eyes. I am a realist as well as an idealist; I am habitually reserved and quiet; I am very cautious and disciplined and I am an optimist. In general, I am mild and soft-spoken, but in when angered I burst lash out loudly. I prefer to listen than to talk. People are find me uneasy going around me. I am very faithful to my commitments and I am always ready to help the needy to the best of my ability;ones but within my capacity not in a heroic way. Apparently I am extremely unsociable, always try to avoid parties, even family wedding ceremonial parties, but inside there is love and careing. I am a very loyal hard core for friends, but and for them it is not easy to read my emotions.
I like both of your variants. Karen has noticed and corrected everything. You are a hardworking person!
Nice work as always
It was interesting to read how you found yourself.
Thank you!
I have this time 3 kinds of comments Mishaikh!
1) Per Karen´s review, wise decision, recently decided to review this Language. My experience is that those Languages not native, has to be reviewed constantly!
2)Your work, as always: deep, touchy and strongly absorbent of attention!!
3) Hope sometime, this introspection help you to get rid of the core and leave emerge the love and care, for your good sake and of your dear beings!!
My best wishes for you!!
AIDA!!
You have already received very good advices.
I'd rather say : I prefer listening to talking.
You did an excellent job... a very descriptive picture of yourself
Congratulations and keep up the good work !!!
:))
Thanks AIDA for all your concerns about the thoughts I put on the paper for READERS. I thank you all for your appreciations and encouragement.
hi Mishaikh !
I am agree!!!
You are writing for READERS !
I made the confront between these 2 versions ( yours and Karen's version ).
Conclusion: I chose YOURS !
:)
Well written .You have justly introduce yourself covering both of your aspects. through your writing it seems that you bear good personality as your writings.