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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

Mariapia's submission: Average Rating:
I am going to church every Sunday by my car. It is about 30 km from my house. I usually leave my house at 8:50 am. First I am driving to the place where one of our congregation lives to pic up her at 9:10 am. Then I am driving to another place to pic up a cuple in their 70s. We all four are going together to church around 10:00am. After the church service is over I am coming back to my house alone around 1:30pm.
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  • shizuka_na_oka
    Mochapoints: 278  |  Teacher Score: 77 (0%)
    You have a couple of spelling errors and some grammatical errors. It should read like this. I go to church every Sunday by car. It is about 30 km from my house. I usually leave my house at 8:50 am. First, I am drivE to the place where one of our congregation lives to picK up her at 9:10 am. Then, I drive to another place to pick up a couple in their 70s. We all four gotogether to church around 10:00am. After the church service is over, I come back to my house alone around 1:30pm.
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  • Mariapia
    Mochapoints: 845  |  Teacher Score: 472 (0%)
    Dear seishukunoota, Thank you for your kind and precious comment on my paper. I sent this paper titled 'Transportation'. I don't know why it has been changed into 'Going on vacation.'
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  • Japanbound
    Mochapoints: 2822  |  Teacher Score: 706 (0%)

    I go to church every Sunday by  car. It is about 30 km from my house. I usually leave my house at 8:50 am. First ,I  drive to the place where one of our congregation lives to pick her up at 9:10 am. Then I drive to another place to pick up a couple in their 70s. All four of us ride to church together . We arive at the church around 10:00am. After the church service is over, I return  to my house alone around 1:30pm.

    I think you should practice present and past tense. There are a few spelling errors, but the biggest problem here is that you which between present past and future tense. you must always keep in mind to stick with only one:). Keep up the good work!
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