Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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My father has white and black hair, it was called pepper-salt hair. My mother has a long black hair, it is not curly, it very straight and soft. My sister has straight hair but it is not black, it has brown. My young sister does not have black and long hair, her hair is short and blond. I have long hair same as my mother, not brown like my sister hair but it is blond like my young sister hair. My young brother not hair, he is bald because he is just one year old. And you, how about your hair, it is straight hair or curly hair, black , brown or blond, long or short. Say to me, ok ?
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My young brother not hair, he is bald because he is just one year old. And you, how about your hair, it is straight hair or curly hair, black , brown or blond, long or short. Say to me, ok ?????