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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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Le Loi street which is a busy road and most impressive in Ho Chi Minh city. It is the road located in city center. If you begin walk from Quach Thi Trang square, first you will see Ben Thanh market on the street. This is where you can to buy any things you need for travelling or souvenir. Along the street have crowded trade shops,many souvenir shop, shopping center, bank, restaurant and buildings of companys. Near in end of the road, you will see a square where people arrive to entertainment on the weekends. this place also where is held the festivals major cultural of city. There is a big theather at the end road. The tourists always come here to feel the difference of an Eastern city.
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  • siyuan
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    Le Loi street which is a busy road and most impressive in Ho Chi Minh city. It is the road located in city center. If you begin walk from Quach Thi Trang square, first you will see Ben Thanh market on the street. This is where you can to buy any things you need for travelling or souvenir. Along the street have crowded trade shops,many souvenir shop, shopping center, bank, restaurant and buildings of companys. Near in end of the road, you will see a square where people arrive to entertainment on the weekends. this place also where is held the festivals major cultural of city. There is a big theather at the end road. The tourists always come here to feel the difference of an Eastern city.

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  • siyuan
    Mochapoints: 22653  |  Teacher Score: 11321 (100%)

    Le Loi street which is a busy road and THE most impressive road in Ho Chi Minh city. It is the road located in THE city center. If you begin TO walk from Quach Thi Trang square, first you will see Ben Thanh market on the street. This is where you can to buy any things you need for travelling or souvenirS. Along the street have THERE ARE crowded trade shops, many souvenir shopS, shopping centerS, bank(s), restaurantS and buildings of companIEs. Near in AT THE end of the road, you will see a square where people arrive to HAVE entertainment on the weekends. The major cultural festivals of the city is also held here. This place also where is held the festivals major cultural of city. There is a big theather theatre at the end OF THE road. The Tourists always come here to feel the difference of an Eastern city.

    Well done!

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