Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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I like walking in the park and got the fresh air. Sometimes I sit by the lake and do some reading in the moening. I like watching people fishing,too. last weekend, I got a picnic there with my friends.we had a barbecue and played badminton together. We had a good time.
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I like walking in the park and getting fresh air. Sometimes I sit by the lake and do some reading in the moRning. I like watching people fishing,too.Last weekend, I had a picnic there with my friends. We had a barbecue and played badminton together. We had a good time.
Average Score: Submitted: Mar 2, 2010, 10:21 amIt is very good
I had a picnic
I like walking in the park and enjoying the fresh air. Sometimes I sit by the lake and do some reading in the morning. I like watching people fishing too. Last weekend, I went on a a picnic with my friends. We had a barbecue and played badminton together. We had a good time.