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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 4

My Country

Instructions: Please introduce the country in which you live. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?

tai's submission: Average Rating:
I live in japan , hokkaido island.
I want to visit europian cuntries .
My last trip is thaialnd , bangkok .
Submitted over a year ago

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  • DanQir
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    I live in Hokaido islan, Japan. I want to visit Europe cuntries . My last trip is in Bangkok, Thailand.
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  • Dwria
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    I live in Hokaido Island Japan. I want to visiting Europe Countries. My last trip was Bangkok Thailand.

     

    thats a lil bit notice from me ^^
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  • シズネ
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    I am living in Japan which is in Hokkaido Island. I want to visit Europian countries . My last trip was Bangkok, Thailand

     

    Btw, good try!!! ^^.
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  • antphy
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    Hi, Tai san. ohisashiburi desu ne

    Ogenki desuka?

     

    Here a bit correction from me, hope helping^^

    I live in Hokkaido, Japan. I want to visit Europe countries. I went to visit Thailand, Bangkok on my last trip.

     

    Ganbarimashou^^

     
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  • tai
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    DanQir  

    thank you very much !!

    it are many mistake this time. i will try more study !!
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  • tai
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    D,Ria

    Thank you very much 　repeir my sentence !
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  • tai
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    marshmallow

    thank you very much !!!
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  • tai
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    antphy

    thank you very much!!!

    hisasiburidesune ^^ genki desuyo  !! ariagtou .

    apa kabar  ?? sedang sibuk kah?

    terima kasih berbaiki ya !
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  • Michi Yara
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    I live on the island of Hokkaido, japan.
    I want to visit European countries.
    My last trip was bangkok, Thailand.

    hello Tai san,
    watashi wa indoneshia no yara desu..
    douzoyoroshiku ne^^

    bahasa indonesia kamu cukup bagus..
    tetap semangat ya !!!^^
    ganbarimashou~
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  • tai
    Mochapoints: 12323  |  Teacher Score: 8750 (100%)

    hi yara!!

    terima kasih berbaiki ya !

    saya belajar bahasa indonesis dan inglish !

    tepi belum cukup saya kira haha .

    kapan kapan aja saya akan lancar bahasa indonesia !!
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  • jonivb
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    This is how I would fix your submission.

    I live in Japan on the island of Hokkaido.  I want to visit European countries.  My last trip was to Bangkok, Thailand.
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