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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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I woke up around 7.30 am and I had breakfast at 8.00 am. I started my day very tired because I was able to sleep very good yesterday. It is 11 am now and I am very hungry right now, so I will find some meal to eat. I am going to go at restaurant with some friends this afternoon and then I will come back for the night. I will go to my bed around 9 pm.
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  • Linda
    Mochapoints: 6269  |  Teacher Score: 1905

    I woke up at around 7.30 am and I had breakfast at 8.00 am. I started my day very tired because I was not able to sleep very good (well) yesterday. It is 11 am now and I am very hungry right now, so I will find some meal (food) to eat. I am going to go at (to) a restaurant with some friends this afternoon and then I will come back for the night. I will go to my bed at around 9 pm.

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  • lizard30
    Mochapoints: 20397  |  Teacher Score: 4434 (96%)

    I woke up around 7.30 am and I had breakfast at 8.00 am. I started my day very tired because I was not able to sleep very good yesterday. It is 11 am now and I am very hungry right now, so I will find something meal to eat. I am going to go at to a restaurant with some friends this afternoon and then I will come back for the night. I will go to my bed around 9 pm.

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  • Melissa :)
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    I woke up around 7:30 am and I had breakfast at 8:00 am. I started my day feeling very tired because I was not able to sleep very good yesterday. It is 11 am now and I am very hungry right now, so I will find some meal food to eat. I am going to go at to a restaurant with some friends this afternoon and then I will come back for the night. I will go to my bed around 9 pm.

    Great job!  Just a few changes.  Let me know if you have any questions.  :)  I hope that you are well.

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  • Tony
    Mochapoints: 80322  |  Teacher Score: 68461 (99%)

    I woke up around 7.30 a.m. and I had breakfast at 8.00 a.m.  I started my day very tired because I was able to sleep very good well yesterday.  It is 11 a.m. now and I am very hungry right now, so I will find some meal food to eat. I am going to go to a restaurant with some friends this afternoon and then I will come back for the night. I will go to my bed around 9 p.m.

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