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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today it is snowing , and it is cold . The girl needs a scarf and a hat .
Today it is sunny , and it is hot . The man needs a sunglasses and a hat .
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  • David in Calif
    Mochapoints: 666  |  Teacher Score: 424 (0%)

    You can omit "a" before 'sunglasses. And omit the space before a final period in a sentence.
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  • Andy
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    All correct.
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