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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The old woman not have curly hair. She has straight hair.
The man not have blond hair. He has black hair.
I have black hair and beard.
The boy has short hair and no beard.
The girl have long red hair
You have a beatiful blond hair.
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  • Anna
    Mochapoints: 8174  |  Teacher Score: 962 (100%)

    The old woman does* not have curly hair.

    She has straight hair.

    I have black hair and a* black beard.

    The boy has short hair and no beard.

    The girl has* long red hair.

    You have beautiful blond hair.

     

     

    BOM! PARABENS!

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  • Dontmesswithme!
    Mochapoints: 12432  |  Teacher Score: 4954 (91%)

    Anna corrected it already :P

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  • ritchie
    Mochapoints: 1573  |  Teacher Score: 794 (84%)

    The old woman DOES NOT Have curly hair. She has straight hair.The man DOES not have blond hair. He has black hair.I have black hair and beard.The boy has short hair and no beard.The girl haS long red hairYou have a beatiful blond hair.

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  • 7UI5
    Mochapoints: 27171  |  Teacher Score: 3576 (94%)

    Hi!

    Há duas formas para fazer isto, com "have" e com "have got"  por exemplo:

    The old woman doesn't have curly hair.

    The old woman hasn't got curly hair.

    The man doesn't have blond hair.

    The man hasn't got blond hair.

    I have black hair and a black beard.

    The girl has long red hair

    The girl has got long red hair.

    Se você quer saber mais disto olhe este link:

    http://www.1-language.com/englishcourse/unit19_grammar.htm

    Parabénssegue tentando e boa sorte!

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  • Frederickco
    Mochapoints: 30301  |  Teacher Score: 5665 (100%)

    same as above

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