Giving and Receiving
Instructions:
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2
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In my travelfor Bahia i getting some presents. My aunte gave me a shirt. I getting a bracelet, Salvador many artisans, who do a great job.
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When I traveled to Bahia, I got some presents. My aunt gave me a shirt. I got also a bracelet from an artisan in Salvador, who did a great job.
When I traveled to Bahia,I got some presents.
My aunt gave me a shirt.
I also got an bracelet.
There were many artisans in Salvador,who did a great job.
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