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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Describing household objects.

Instructions: Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.

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The computer is in the studyroom.
The dresser and mirror are in the bedroom.
The car is in the garage
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  • charlie Buck
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    very good writing.

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  • -Jᴏɴ-
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    The computer is in the study room. The dresser and mirror are in the bedroom. The car is in the garage.

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  • zorro
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    The computer is in the studyroom  (The computer is in my office).The dresser and mirror are in the bedroom.The car is in the garage.   The tv is in the living room.   My old clothes and books are in the basement.   The Christmas decorations are in the attic.

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  • MrPete
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    Good.

    You can say the 'the study room' or just 'the study'. These are both the same.

    My version is:

    "The computer is in the study.The dresser and mirror are in the bedroom.The car is in the garage"

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  • Carmen Rosa
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    Very good

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