Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.
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These are three women. Two women are fat. One woman is not fat. She is thin.
These are eight cars. Five cars are black. Three cars are not black. They are white.
These are two buildings. Oe building is red and short. The other building is neither red nor short. It is white and tall.
These are four men. Three men are tall and rich. One is neither tall nor rich. He is short and poor.
Thanks friends.
Submitted over a year ago
English Writing Exercise 
Awesome!
ONE little mistake.. One building is red and short.
But I think that was just a typo :D
There are three women. Two women are fat. One woman is not fat. She is thin.There are eight cars. Five cars are black. Three cars are not black. They are white.There are two buildings. One building is red and low (Short would not be an adjective to describe a building. A building could be low or tall but not short) The other building is neither red nor low. It is white and tall.There are four men. Three men are tall and rich. One is neither tall nor rich. He is short and poor.
A again no mostakes.I've seen no one learning fast.
EXCELLENT PAL
Refer to Jay's review.
i think your meaning THERE instead of THESE otherwise its all accurate although very rudementary [simple]...
Hi Adil: you can say "these" when you are referring to specific objects or people, so your sentences are correct; but when speaking in general you can say "there are..."
Great job as usual!