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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

Mars.chan's submission: Average Rating:
I'm a chineses young man.I'm 178 cm tall. I'm thin.less than 60Kg.I'd like to make friend with all the abroad.
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    Very good! Suggestion: 1. I'm a Chinese young man. 2. I'm thin and weigh less than 60Kg.
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12138  |  Teacher Score: 10263 (100%)
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12138  |  Teacher Score: 10263 (100%)
    Well done Mars! You may also write like this: 'I am a young Chinese man of 1m78 tall. I am thin, weighing less than 60 Kg. I would like to make friends from abroad/ all over the world.' Keep it up. Cheers Eliz
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  • Mars.chan
    Mochapoints: 1493  |  Teacher Score: 766 (0%)
    Thank you!
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  • sirikhan
    Mochapoints: 6748  |  Teacher Score: 631 (0%)
    keep up my freind
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  • Sarah
    Mochapoints: 3108  |  Teacher Score: 2136 (100%)
    I'd like to make friends with people from all over the world.
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  • Ron
    Mochapoints: 21912  |  Teacher Score: 10328 (100%)

    I'm a young chinese man. I'm 1.78 meters tall. I'm thin , less than 60Kg.I'd like to make friends with all the abroad.

    I'd like to make friends from all over the world.

    I'd like to make friends from around the world.
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