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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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The woman is making dinner at twelve o'clock.
The women are going to the hairdresser at five forty.
The man plays guitar every friday at half past seven.
The men are watching football at quarter past five.
The girl study english avery day at six o'clock.
The boy is reading the book at three forty five
You are runing at the park at quarter to eight
I eat my breakfast at half past seven every day.
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  • -Jᴏɴ-
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    The man plays guitar every Friday at half past seven. The men are watching football at a quarter past five. The girl studies English every day at six o'clock. The boy is reading the book at three forty-five. You are running at the park at a quarter to eight. I eat my breakfast at half past seven every day.

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  • MrPete
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    Very good.

    My version is:

    "The woman is making dinner at twelve o'clock.The women are going to the hairdresser at five forty.The man plays guitar every friday at half past seven.The men are watching football at a quarter past five.The girl studies english every day at six o'clock.The boy is reading the book at three forty-five.You are running to the park at a quarter to eight. I eat my breakfast at half past seven every day."

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  • zorro
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    The woman is making dinner at twelve o'clock.   The women are going to the hairdresser at five-forty.   The man plays guitar every Friday at half past seven.The men are watching football at a quarter past five.   The girl studies English every day at six o'clock.   The boy is reading the book at three forty-five.   You are running at the park at a quarter to eight.   I eat my breakfast at half past seven every day.

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  • magje
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    Follow the suggestions mentioned below :)

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  • charlie Buck
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    is going to the hairdresser

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