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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3

Describing Objects

Instructions: Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.

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The building where I live is new.I bought it the end of last year. The building is site in the third floor.It's not too big.That only has 98 Square meter.There are two bedroom a kitchen room a bathing room and a living room. The front door is brown.
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  • Luke
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  • Chynna
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    Great efforts!! Suggestion: 1. I bought it at the end of last year. 2. My home is on the third floor. It's not too big. 3. There are two bedrooms, a kitchen, a bath room and a living room. 4. 98 square meters
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  • Eliz
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  • Eliz
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    Good attempt Mars! You may also write in this way:'The building where I live is new. I bought it at the end of last year. I live in the 3rd floor which is not too big, only 98 sq mt. There are two bedrooms, kitchen room, a bathroom and a living room. The front door is in brown.' Hope it helps. Keep it up. Cheers Eliz
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  • Eliz
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    Oops sorry it should be a 'kitchenette' not 'a kitchen room'. Eliz
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    Very good, a few mistakes, but to be expected. First watch your spacings- 1 after a comma , two after a full stop . You could either say your apartment (American) or Flat (English) is on the third floor, it is not ver big, around 98 square meters. There are two bedroom, a kitchen, bathroom nd living room. The front door is brown. As you see, it is very well written, well done, Cam
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  • Mars.chan
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    Thank you very much ,my dear friends!
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  • Sarah
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    very good! you can say "kitchen", or you can say "kitchenette" if it's very small or does not have all the appliances of a regular kitchen.
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    The building where I live is new.I bought it at the end of last year. My apartment is on the third floor. It's not too big.That only has 98 square meters. There are two bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a livingroom. The front door is brown.
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  • Ron
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    The building where I live is new.I bought it at the end of last year. The building  apartment is site in situated on the third floor.It's not too big , That   it is  only has 98 Square meters.There are two bedrooms , a kitchen room , a bathing room and a living room. The front door is brown.
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