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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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Today is 4/7/2008,Friday.I am so excited because I became a vounteer about earthquake,I didn't go to Wenchuan,but our team will be trained to be ready for the next disaster.I was lucky enough because people wants to join this team must be over 16 years old and i am just 16 years old!! I am ready!
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  • blue sky
    Mochapoints: 9652  |  Teacher Score: 2919 (88%)
    very good ,you write well . Don't worry my friend about earthquake. Good luck !
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    Today is Friday, July 4, 2008. I am so excited because I became a volunteer about earthquake. I didn't go to Wenchuan, but our team will be trained to be ready for the next disaster.I was lucky enough because people who want to join this team must be over 16 years old and I am just 16 years old!! I am ready!
    Submitted over a year ago
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