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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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There is a computer a cup and some books on my desk. there are three drawer in it. near my desk ,there is a bed,a wardrobe .
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  • Mochapoints: 5994  |  Teacher Score: 5144 (0%)
    Very good, let me show you how to use your puncuation. There is a computer, a cup and some books on my desk. There are three drawers in it. Near my desk is a bed and wardrobe. Very good, try to work on your commas-, and full stops. Look at the exercise I have retyped to help you, Cam
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  • Sarah
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    I agree with cam.
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  • My picture
    Mochapoints: 1961  |  Teacher Score: 1338 (0%)
    The comments of two ladies are the same as mine too! You described it well!..
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  • Mars.chan
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    Thank your,my friends
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
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    There are three drawers in it. Near my desk, there is a bed, and a wardrobe .
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  • Eliz
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  • Eliz
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    Excellent Mars! You are progressing and your friends' comment are helpful for you. Keep it up. Cheers Eliz
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  • Olesya
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  • Olesya
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    Well done!
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  • Ron
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    There is a computer, a cup and some books on my desk. There are three drawer in it. Near my desk ,there is a bed,a  and a wardrobe .

    There are three drawer in it. In what?

    My desk has three drawers in it.

     
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  • Ron
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    Cam noticed an unnecessary comma I missed.

    He  is correct.

    Near my desk is a bed and wardrobe.
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  • Esther Chua
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    computer,cup,books,desk,wardrobe...etc are not professions.

    E.g. of professions are:

    teacher,lawyer,lecturer,manager,secretary,designer...etc
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