Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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Her name is Esther. She is a pretty woman. She is tall. She is 27 years old. She works in Scalextrix company. She is going to married next year.
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jmeaux6Mochapoints: 351 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
jmeaux6Mochapoints: 351 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)
Good job! One correction though. Una correccion sin embargo. She is getting married next year. or She is going to get married next year. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JonsonMochapoints: 1887 | Teacher Score: 724 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
FitzroyMochapoints: 2787 | Teacher Score: 1162 (100%)Her name is Esther . She is 27 years old, tall and very pretty. She works in Scalextrix company and she is going to get married next year. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Benardo M.Mochapoints: 606 | Teacher Score: 65 (0%)muito bom! mas assim ficaria melhor: Her name is Esther . She is 27 years old, tall and very pretty. She works in Scalextrix company and she is getting married ( or going to get married) next year. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
LeighMochapoints: 60 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)Almost perfect! Instead of having several short sentences, you could use what we call "conjunctions". Here is a better way to say it: Her name is Esther. She is a tall, pretty woman who is 27 years old. She works for the company Scalextrix and is going to get married next year. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
LeighMochapoints: 60 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)Submitted over a year ago
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brianMochapoints: 4310 | Teacher Score: 3024 (100%)I understood what you wrote. Well done! I would agree with small change already suggested. She is going to GET married next year. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
DillonMochapoints: 8506 | Teacher Score: 5924 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
DillonMochapoints: 8506 | Teacher Score: 5924 (100%)
good sentence Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Panish DesaiMochapoints: 4906 | Teacher Score: 987 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Panish DesaiMochapoints: 4906 | Teacher Score: 987 (100%)
Esto muy bien un coreccione "She is getting married " hasta pronto buenos dias Gracias y Adios Panish Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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