Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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My husband is liying in Qatar (in the Gulf) where his works take place, so I spent my last vacation with him in Doha the capital of Qatar. The terrain is flat and rocky covered with sand flats and dunes and it has a hot climat. Because of the hot all the places we visited were indoors like resturants, malls, and Qatar National Musem where displaying a collection of Islamic artifacts which has a lot to tell about the countrys past. Later I hope to visit Italy the country of art.
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chrisMochapoints: 4757 | Teacher Score: 2723 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
chrisMochapoints: 4757 | Teacher Score: 2723 (100%)
A very good, interesting paragraph! My husband is *living* in Qatar (in the Gulf) where *he is now working*, so I spent my last vacation with him in Doha*,* the capital of Qatar. The terrain is flat and rocky*,* covered with sand flats and dunes*.* and it has a hot *climate*. Because of the *heat* all the places we visited were indoors like *restaurants*, malls, and Qatar National Musem *which is* displaying a collection of Islamic artifacts which has a lot to tell about the *country's* past. Later I hope to visit Italy*,* the country of art. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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