Professions
Instructions:
Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6
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My desk is dark mahogany. On it are my computer, my telephone and a fax machine. In the drawers are the usual office items; paper clips, a ruler, cellophane tape, notepads, pens and pencils.
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you are excellent:)
Incomplete:
The lesson asks to discribe four people.
There is only one.
Aslo, there are no negatives.
Such as: My desk is not light, it is dark.
The exercise asks for describing professions of 4 people, but here the desk and other items are described.
I dont understand other people's comments also.
Very well written
Don, you're amazing man! Well done, keep on going!
Very well done. And I learned a new word. Thanks.
I have a question.What is the relationship between the head of the question and your answer?
ok good job