English Writing Exercise

Professions

Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Don Moore
My desk is dark mahogany. On it are my computer, my telephone and a fax machine. In the drawers are the usual office items; paper clips, a ruler, cellophane tape, notepads, pens and pencils.
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Submitted: 2009-08-12 19:26:57




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  • 2008-08-07 03:44:47
    dolphinice
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  • 2008-08-07 03:44:50
    dolphinice
    today I learn some new words from you...Thanks......o(∩_∩)o...come on...
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  • 2008-08-08 20:48:13
    Don Moore
    I would have to give a 5 star for this. Good in any way. Keep up the good work.
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  • 2008-11-01 14:03:29
    enigma
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    Thanks for your inf...:)
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  • 2008-11-06 03:30:08
    pfphoenix
    What's this? I don't know.
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  • 2008-11-06 03:44:45
    Don Moore
    Very well done.
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  • 2008-11-06 04:37:34
    John
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    Is this called upside-down mounting? I learn it from you and try to use it next time.
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  • 2008-11-06 05:15:14
    Don Moore
    Well done.
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  • 2008-11-22 23:23:12
    tae
    Who is doing the exercise & who is commenting? Very confusing & well done for what?
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  • 2008-11-23 03:35:13
    Don Moore
    Perfectly written, again
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  • 2008-12-17 14:50:44
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    you are excellent:)

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  • 2009-04-22 14:35:50
    Larry Roberton
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    Incomplete:

    The lesson asks to discribe four people.

    There is only one.

    Aslo, there are no negatives.

    Such as: My desk is not light, it is dark.

     

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  • 2009-05-23 18:19:48
    Rukhsana
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    The exercise asks for describing professions of 4 people, but here the desk and other items are described.

    I dont understand other people's comments also. 

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  • 2009-05-25 04:33:53
    Don Moore

    Very well written

     

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  • 2009-08-12 19:26:57
    Nick

    Don, you're amazing man! Well done, keep on going!

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