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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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Hi. I usually get to work using my car. I work not to far with regard to where I live. I work in the countryside. Then I need to use the car because there are only a few buses to get there.
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  • Marie
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    but try to use less prepositions in your sentences. It is one of the common sources of mistakes .
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  • adrk
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    not too far

     

    and try to use less prepositions in your sentences. It is one of the common sources of mistakes .
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