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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3

Describe your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?

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I have two sisters who are older than me.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • eloahayal
    Mochapoints: 945  |  Teacher Score: 30 (0%)
    Ok, it's correct. vous pouvez également dire: "I have two sisters, they are older to me."
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Mel
    Mochapoints: 12817  |  Teacher Score: 8457 (100%)
    Hello, Charlie. This sentence is well written but with one minor grammatical error. It should read, "I have two sisters who are older than I." Or you may write this simpler by writing, " I have two older sisters".
    Submitted over a year ago
  • nikta
    Mochapoints: 379  |  Teacher Score: 54 (0%)
    that's correct. well done
    Submitted over a year ago

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