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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is July 20th. The weather is cool and raining. I think it will rain tomorrow.
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  • John Tan
    Mochapoints: 9651  |  Teacher Score: 8894 (100%)
    Good try. You have done correctly except you might change the word "raining" to "rainy". It sounds better.
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  • sly100
    Mochapoints: 11695  |  Teacher Score: 9244 (99%)
    A good written piece. Keep it up!!
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  • colinh
    Mochapoints: 150  |  Teacher Score: 20 (0%)
    pretty good i would say. Maybe you should also includ the day with the date. For example "Today is Sunday, July 20th .
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  • sha
    Mochapoints: 159  |  Teacher Score: 5 (0%)
    Nice try. But, I think it would be better if you'd add some more adjectives to describe the weather for your vocabulary enhancement.
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    Very good!
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