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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2

Describe your street

Instructions: Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?

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My imaginary street

Looking through my window I can see my imaginary street. What am I seeing now? I am seeing the woman is walking across the street. The car is coming the other street. Two boy are running across the brigde. There is a river between my street. In front of my house there is a tall building. The man is going up the elevator inside the building. My guest can arrive until my home walking on the sidewalk.
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  • Deborah
    Mochapoints: 40613  |  Teacher Score: 30819 (100%)

    There are a few mistakes, but overall this is well doe.

    Looking through my window I can see my imaginary street. What am I seeing now? I am seeing the  a woman who is walking across the street. The A car is coming from the another street. Two boys are running across the brigde bridge. There is a river between across my street. In front of my house there is a tall building. The A man is going up the elevator inside the building. My guests can arrive until at my home by walking on the sidewalk.

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