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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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In my last vacation, I went to Curitiba, PR. I visited Opera de Arame Theater, Bacacheri Park, Santa Felicidade with yours Italian Food restaurants and Passeio Púbico Park. I recommend to everyone who visited Curitiba in any season. It's a beautiful city.
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  • Kristi
    Mochapoints: 5910  |  Teacher Score: 2434 (99%)

    In On my last vacation, I went to Curitiba, PR. I visited Opera de Arame Theater, Bacacheri Park, Santa Felicidade (with yours Italian Food restaurants I dont know what this means) and Passeio Púbico Park. I would recommend to that everyone who visit Curitiba, in any season. It's a beautiful city.

    Good :)

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  • samuelle_p
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    On my last vacation i went to Curitiba, PR. I visited Opera de Arame Theatre,Bacacheri Park, Santa Felicidade,the Italian food restaurants and Passeio Púbico Park. I would recommend that everybody should visit  Curitiba in any season. It is a beautiful city.

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