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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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Hallo,
today I want to describe the groceries that I bought during my last grocery shopping trip. I bought different fruit like apples, bananas, olives and a basket of cherry. My mom bought also some fruit like mangos, a basket of strawberry and a basket of potatos. The most expensive item was the mango. We don't buy a item that we haven't tried before. My mom said she would make a strawberry stewed fruit.

Mmm, I was very pleased about it. =)

Thanks, for reading.
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  • summer
    Mochapoints: 92393  |  Teacher Score: 69859 (98%)

    My mom also bought ....

    potatoes

     

    Great job. Only 2 corrections to make.

    1. the adverb ALSO has to stay before the verb BOUGHT

    2. You mispelled potatoes in plural form.

    ONE POTATO - TWO POTATOES

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  • Elena
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    Hello, today I want to describe the groceries that I bought during my last grocery shopping trip. I bought different fruits like  such as  apples, bananas, olives and a basket of cherry. My mom bought also bought some fruits like such as mangos, a basket of strawberry and a basket of potatoes. The most expensive item was the mango. We don't buy an item that we haven't tried before. My mom said she would make a strawberry stewed fruit.

    In this case,"such as" is more appropriate than "like".

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  • Jim Gieseke
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    Hello,today I want to describe the groceries that I bought during my last grocery shopping trip. I bought several different kinds of fruit like(like or such as)apples, bananas, olives and a basket of cherries. My mom also bought also some fruit like mangos, a basket of strawberries and a basket of potatoes.(Be aware that potatoes aren't fruit, but are vegetables)The most expensive item was the mango. We don't buy an item that we haven't tried before. My mom said she would make a strawberry stewed fruit with strawberries.Mmm, I was very pleased about it.that. =)

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  • Debs
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    Hallo,Ttoday I want to describe the groceries that I bought during my last grocery shopping trip. I bought different fruit like apples, bananas, olives and a basket of cherries cherry. My mom also bought also some fruit like mangos, a basket of strawberries strawberry and a basket of potatoes. The most expensive item was the mango. We didn't don't buy an item that we haven't tried before. My mom said she would make a strawberry stewed fruit.Mmm, I was very pleased about it. =)

    Wonderful Stefan...very well done :))

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