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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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Gary Johnson went to work last Monday, as usual. He walked into the office, but nobody was there. He looked in the offices. He looked in the cafeteria. He looked in the employee bathrooms. He even looked in the basement. Gary didn't know what to do. He walked back to his office. The lights in his office were turned off. He turned on the lights and everybody he worked with yelled: "Surprise!" It was Gary's birthday.
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  • Arthur67
    Mochapoints: 463  |  Teacher Score: 206 (100%)

    Excellent, I can't find any mistakes! But wasn't the exercise called 'your last vacation'?  ;-)

    Submitted over a year ago
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