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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3

Describing Objects

Instructions: Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.

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the building is not orange
the house is not red
the car is not silver
the tree is not green
the flower is not gold
the coin is not gold
it is gold
it is red
it is orange
it is silver
it is white
it is purple
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  • ValBanks
    Mochapoints: 95020  |  Teacher Score: 77650 (100%)

    Hey, Ahmed, when you write positive and negative attributes, both are written in the same sentence. Your spelling is great! Your punctuation needs work. Each sentence in English must begin with a capital letter and end with a period. A comma [,] is placed between the positive part of the sentence and the negative one.  See my corrections below, and keep practicing.

    The building is not orange, it is gold. The house is not red, it is orange. The car is not silver, it is red. The tree is not green, it is orange. The flower is not gold, it is white. The coin is not gold, it is purple.

    Submitted over a year ago
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