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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3

Describing Objects

Instructions: Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.

Pardeep Singh's submission: Average Rating:
This maaruti car is red. It has four wheels. It is not long than others.
This flower is red of colour but it is not a rose.
This is silver coin but it is not a golden coin.
This is mangoes tree. It is not tall as oak.
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  • Heather H.
    Mochapoints: 1672  |  Teacher Score: 370 (100%)

    This maaruti car is red. We just use the name of the type of car. "This Maruti is red." "This Honda is green."

    It has four wheels. It is not longer than others. This flower is red of in colour but it is not a rose.

    This is a silver coin but ; it is not a golden coin. This sentence sounds weird- we would not use "but" here.

    This is a mangoes tree. It is not tall as an oak.

    Great job!

    Submitted over a year ago
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