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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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This summer I visited Austria, it's a beautiful country at north of Italy. There are many things to visit: mountains, lake, city...I visited Glossglocker Glacier, it's a wonderful place. I visited also a little nice city Klagenfurt in southern Austria and Velden on Worthersee, very beautiful place! The only unfortunate thing is that the Austrian police stop only foreigners cars! ;o)
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    During the summer holidays, I visited Austria. It's a beautiful country to the north of Italy.

    There are many things to visit: mountains, lakes, cities...etc. I visited Glossglocker Glacier which is a wonderful place. I also visited a nice little city called Klagenfurt in southern Austria and Velden on Worthersee. Both are very beautiful places!

    The only unfortunate thing is that the Austrian police stops cars with foreigners inside! ;o)

     

    Hi Max

    Good work. It must have been a lovely holiday :)

     

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