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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Babak Sheikh...'s submission: Average Rating:
The man is handsome
The woman is so pretty.
that girl has got blon hair
that boy has got brown hair
I am electrical engineer.
you are a big man.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • lizblaydes
    Mochapoints: 622  |  Teacher Score: 411 (100%)

    Everything looks awesome, there's just a few errors. You need two descriptive words for each sentence.

    The man is handsome and tall.

    The woman is so pretty and thin.

    That girl has blonde hair and blue eyes.

    That boy has brown hair and is short.

    I am an electrical engineer and smart.

    You are a big man and fat.

    Don't forget about the periods at the end of each sentence, and a capital to start with.

    Submitted over a year ago
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