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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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My friend,Cherry,is a great girl.We have been friend for eight years .So we know each other very much.At the beginning ,we have many similiar features,we dressed like twins,listen to the same kind of music.Later,although our interests changed a lot.We also can talk from day to night.We are as close as before.Bless her.
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  • Dangoo11
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    My friend Cherry is a great girl.We have been friends for eight years .So we know each other very much.At the beginning ,we have had many similiar features.we dressed like twins,listen to the same kind of music.Later,although our interests changed a lot.We also can talk from day to night.We are as close as before.God Bless her.

    good!!

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  • Mark Proffitt
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    My friend, Cherry, is a great girl. We have been friend for eight years. So we know each other very well. At the beginning, we had many similiar features, we dressed like twins and listen to the same kind of music. Although, later our interests changed a lot. We also can talk from day to night. We are as close as before. Bless her.

     

    Put spaces after punctuation and before the next word. Some of the tenses did not match.

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