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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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The man is not thin. He is fat. The woman is not rich. She is poor.
A boy is not a girl. He is a boy. A girl is not old. She is young.

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  • Mark Proffitt
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    Perfect.

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  • Dan
    Mochapoints: 1466  |  Teacher Score: 446 (100%)

    You only described 4 people. You have to describe you and me also.

    Well done. I know the lesson didn't teach you this but its better to say 'The man is not thin, he is fat'. 'The woman is not rich, she is poor'. Comma instead of full stop.

    Keep up the hard work

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