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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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I live in guangzhou now,but shantou is my hometowm.I was born there and i had lived in shantou 15 years .Guanzhou is a big city,but i like shantou more.Because there have friendly people,freash air,many green trees and many diliciouse foods so on.In fact,my greandmaoth live in shantou,i love her,so i also want to live n shantou with her.Don't let her alone.
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  • Chris
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    I live in Guangzhou now, but Shantou is my hometown. I was born there and I had lived in Shantou 15 years. Guanzhou is a big city, but I like Shantou more because it has friendly people, fresh air, many green trees and many delicious foods etc. In fact my grandmother lives in Shantou. I love her so I also want to live in Shantou with her so that she is not alone. Very good Lixiangzyf. Remember that place names are always capitalized as well as the pronoun 'I'.
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  • blackjack
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    >>>>>>>Because there was friendly people,freash air,many green trees and diliciouse food and so on.In fact,my grandmother is living in shantou now,I love her,so I want to live in shantou with her. Good work,notice some little mistake
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  • gye-sooncross
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  • gye-sooncross
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    or .... because there are friendly people or the people are friendly Super work, Lixiangzyf.
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  • 1Caucasian_Asia...
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    Good Job! Please consider chris's corrections. Keep up the great work!
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  • Henrique _ 恩裏克
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    Grandmother in true no? ^^ yeah, in Shantou have more fresh air than Guangzhou hehe
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  • Awen
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    You write with so much feeling that I didn't even notice your mistakes. Let others write correct English, you just write the way you do my dear!
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