Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today is Monday,26th ,July.It is summer in china,so everyday is hot.You konw,if summer day is coming ,the people like to come to beach for swim.But i can't swim,so i have to stay at home when is hot outside.The weather forecast report that tomorrow there will raining.I was so happy heard that.
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RayMochapoints: 91639 | Teacher Score: 86768 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
RayMochapoints: 91639 | Teacher Score: 86768 (100%)
Very good. konw --> know come to the beach--> go to the beach. True, people do come to the beach but we in America would say "people go to the beach. You know, if a summer day is coming, the people like to go to the beach to swim. Need "it" ...so I have to stay at home when it is hot outside. The weather forecast report says that tomorrow there will be rain. You need a helping verb for "heard" I was so happy to have heard that. or I was happy to hear that. Also, when you write or type, leave a space between the sentences. example: Today is Monday, 26 July. It is summer in China.... Note above "China" is a proper name (proper noun) it needs to be capitalized. Not china but China. You are doing very well with your written English. Keep up the very good work. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
RolandMochapoints: 5241 | Teacher Score: 3336 (100%)Good, good, good my friend... I agree with the comments above. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
1Caucasian_Asia...Mochapoints: 2816 | Teacher Score: 1787 (100%)Good Job! Here is the paragraph with the corrections. --------- Today is Monday, July 26th. It is summer in China, so everyday is hot. You know, if a summer day is coming, the people like to go to the beach to swim. However, I can't swim, so I have to stay at home when it is hot outside. The weather forecast report said that it will rain tomorrow. I was so happy to have heard that. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
DannyMochapoints: 10639 | Teacher Score: 4181 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Henrique _ 恩裏克Mochapoints: 81647 | Teacher Score: 62314 (97%)hehe u must learn swim, for refresh ur mind ^^ Good Job ... Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
NebilMochapoints: 10776 | Teacher Score: 6985 (100%)Today is monday, 26th July. It is summer in China, so everyday it's hot. You know, when summer time comes, people like to go to the beach to swim. But I can't swim, so I have to stay at home when it's hot outside. When the weather forecast reports that it will be raining the next day, I become happy. Very good!!Lixiangzyf, impressive. Keep it up. Don't forget to write 'I' in capital letter, and also 'c' in China should be written in capital letter because 'China' is a proper noun. And i agree with hgb7, you should learn how to swim so you can have fun in the summer!! Nebil. Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
taurusMochapoints: 4543 | Teacher Score: 2004Hello Eva. Everything's been said, and I agree with the corrections stated above. Take them by heart and you will surely be good in writing English. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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