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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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I will have a business trip to a city next Month. Now I have to make in advance a room reservation in a hotel there. I ever stayed there two years ago, which was very quiet and clean. Therefore, this time I still want to book the room in the same hotel. The important thing is that I can use my computer in the room and eat breakfast on the bed. Everything is very convenient, and they have a good service quality.
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  • Alanlancs1
    Mochapoints: 13950  |  Teacher Score: 8601 (96%)
    Hen hao ! I will have a business trip to a city next month so I have to make a hotel room reservation in advance. I stayed there two years ago and it was very quiet and clean. Therefore, this time I want to book the room in the same hotel as last time. The important thing is that I can use my computer in the room and eat breakfast in bed. Everything is very convenient, and they have a good quality of service.
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  • SiGe
    Mochapoints: 6003  |  Teacher Score: 4630 (100%)
    第一句中的 month是不需要大写的，英文中对写母的大小写也是的规则的，不是想大写就大写的。 I ever stayed there....中的ever没有必要加。 I stayed there two years ago, which was....这是的那个which引导的从句是用来修饰哪个词的？我知道你是想用它说时那个hotel，但是在主句I stayed there two years ago中没有这个词。如果说是修饰 there，也不可，因为 which 引导的从句应该修饰的是名词，而 there 明显不是一个名词。 表示在床上英文中用 in，而不是汉语中“上”直译过去的 on。 另外，你也以再看一下上面的朋友给你重写的内容，他已经把你的语病都去掉了。只是没有给你讲述为什么。
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  • Flyingsnow
    Mochapoints: 2703  |  Teacher Score: 165 (0%)
    HI, Sige, I have seen your English is better than me a lot, your comments are exactly correct, I can understand them immediately, I am just very careless. If I am more serious , I am sure those mistakes surely can be avoided. But one of my friends told me that it is better for a langauge learner to try to expose careless mistakes, the more you make the mistakes, the more you can learn from native speakers. Do you also think so? Anyway, thanks a lot for your help, and look forward to talking with you soon.
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